Concise
Just a short little poem that I wrote the other day...
You all know what it's about.
Strings on my fingers
I can’t control this
The ring at my mouth
Brings me memories of your kiss
The music’s on full blast
My body’s askew
I’m lost in my longing
And memories of you.
I never thought it’d come to pass
But now it seems to be the last
Poem that I will write for you
Something I thought that I never would do.
You all know what it's about.
posted by Patrick at 10:50 AM
2 Comments:
Very beautiful Patrick. It makes me like you more as a person because I know (I'm assumeing) you're talking about Nicole and it makes me so happy to know that my best friend has someone as good as you.
I love the line:
"I'm lost in my longing
And memories of you"
I want someone to talk about me like that. Grrr! It also makes me feel oober jealous because it seems like everyone I know has someone besides me.
Superb as usual Patricio.
What? Nicole? ;P
lol. Jk.
Yes, you assumed right.
heh.. I don't really know what to say to that. But thank you.
I'd have to say my favorite line is.... um... hmmmm.... basically all of them except
"I never thought it’d come to pass
But now it seems to be the last."
I just like this poem a lot. I'd have to say it's my favorite out of anything I've written thus far.
And thanks again.
Ps. you and morgan need to make up your minds, then. We're all really confused. And I still don't think it's good for you.
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