Lie To Me
Lie to me, emotions
Tell me nothing’s wrong,
I defy you.
It seems every good moment
Is a clever ploy to keep me alive;
Just a temporary release
From the bitter world within me.
"Don’t be sad,
I grew out of that years ago"
They all seem to imply.
Pardon the expression, fellows,
But spare me your bullshit.
If real thoughts are beneath you,
Then you can pound me into the ground,
For all it’s worth.
You won’t have me denying this.
This ecstasy in pain.
It must be all I’ve got, now.
This is a week or two old, I believe. At the request by kaisha for *something,* I figured I'd post it. Just another generic poem about pain in general. And a little confusing in points, apparently.
"Pardon the expression, fellows, but spare me your bullshit" refers to the people who tell me to just be happy, not you guys.
posted by Patrick at 4:56 PM
4 Comments:
so very true.
It seems every good moment
Is a clever ploy to keep me alive;
Just a temporary release
From the bitter world within me.
^ that's my favorite part.
not my favorite, but still good, none t he less.
Partic is indeed talented! i believe in writing this you may have obtained me as a fan of your work. Those who do not like your work, cannot relate, those who cannot relate have no souls. you seem to be a very articulate person who knows how to express himself. i do not have a way with words, i instead express my self through drawing, i think i posted one of my drawings on my blog if ur interested, its at nicoleponting.blogspot.com if you can't find a drawing on that one try empressorchid.blogspot.com anyways i'll be back to check up on your poetry at a later date. l8r!
Thank you. ^_^ And might I say you express yourself through drawing very well. Would that I could. Alas, I am stuck with words that other people have created. Ah, well. It's not all bad, I guess.
I think i prefur your words as apposed to my drawings, at least with words you can show that you have a brain!! i often say this, but anyone can draw, it's simple. with modern art the way it is these days you dont even have to be good at it. anyways, at the end of all that rambling, words rock!!
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